After some feedback, I realised that I have gone off on a bit of a tangent. I need to keep relating my research back to the lens and theme and make sure that I’m challenging opinions. I need to think how my research can change peoples perspectives and what they currently know, or what they may not know, about the subject. I do think I want to concentrate on the brain more than the disease itself.

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