I previously discussed my presentation and how I felt it went, I spoke about how I rushed through it and went off point at times which has been clarified in Matts feedback. He also gave me points on how I can improve my blog by picking out flaws and leaving constructive comments. Things that stood out to me were; (1) I am to conversational on my blog, (2) I don’t use enough critical language, (3) I don’t reference my images enough, (4) There is little evidence of discussion and debate.
- Use more description
- Carry out much more thorough research
- Discuss my subject in more depth by referring to research and being more critical with what I find
- Write in a more formal manner
- Use tags
- Critically work through the current blog and make necessary changes in response to Matts feed back